Wednesday, October 8, 2008

beowulf poem


Crazy gross Grendel eating thegeats of herot ripping them with his rough and tough claws the people of herot depend on beowulf. beowulf daring to face the dangerous adn well defended grendel to his death. In the darkness of the dark hall oh herot grendel grasps and griping the geats of the hall. the undicouraging grendels under takes the people of heror and brakes through the bad and unbrakeable chains in herot. Beowulf wants to pursue in purging the hall of herot but is yet not ready wanting to do it hes does at night. Beowulf before sleeping strips his clothes and armour of because Grendel has no clothes nor armour Beowulf wanting to fight Grendel hand to hand with the way he was born to do it. Beowulf comes victorious when he defeats grendel that no other man has done many have failed to do it. Beowulf got his wish granted when he purged the hall for Grendel' unending no pity violence.

7 comments:

.NiNA. said...

MUNDO UR POEM IS THE BEST THAT I'VE READ SO FAR. WELL THE FIRST ONE I READ, LOL BUT YOU GET MY POINT ITS REALLY GOOD.
C/B

Chris said...

dude you snapped. outstanding

Chris said...

please comment my shit

Chris said...

puss!!!!!! yeah i know dude my poem is confusing. thats cause i was focusing on the alliteration. by the time i realized it was confusing i was like fuck it . i had 15 lines and i didn't want to change it. laziness had caught up to me. but yeah. well later dude

Guadalupe said...

hey felix,
i really like you're poem you put in lot's of thougth in the poem i like it.

Marco said...

MunDOOOO!!!(with cho big ass)
haha

pretty good on dat poem son!!

Gabriel said...

was up 63 hey pretty nice poem u did here, n u didn't let me copy man!! lol j/k but yea cool poem lots of that thingy ryming thingy